Showing posts with label Jake. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jake. Show all posts

Wednesday, 6 April 2011

Evaluation-Jake Annison

1) In what ways does your media production use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

It is easy to confuse a thriller production with a horror one, but there are a few significant differences when you know what to look for, for example, horrors involve a lot of gore, guts, scary scenes and they would also usury include a monster, whereas thrillers tend to only use gore when necessary and tend to focus more on a plot driven story. Some typical conventions of thrillers are, they question the audience, they make the audience know as much as the main character and a thriller would definitely have an enigma. our thriller uses some of these conventions for example, we create enigma by have the opening in non-chronological order which questions the audience so we don't give them much of the story which is also known as restricted narration and we do not go over the top with gore or violence in the opening. We do include some violence so as to keep the pace and the excitement of the opening.

2) How does your media production represent particular social groups?

Our thriller does not aim to construct traditional representations of gender. In our opening I (Jake) gets chased through the woods by the Hitman (George) if we had been aiming to enforce a more traditional view of women we would have changed the protagonist from myself to Dani which would of made her the sensitive, passive female victim. The only scene that would hit at the more stereotyped view of women is the bar scene between me and Dani where she plays a bar maid, however i think this scene indicates that she is the antagonist because the drink she serves me is drudged so in a sense the female is the antagonist in our plot.


3) What kind of media institution might distribute your media production and why?

Our thriller would be distributed by 'Soda pictures'. It is going to be shown at the 'Duke of York' Art house, and eventually move onto sky movies. our certification is going to be 15 as our production has violence and also drugs in it, so our audience is a bit thinner then we hoped but we intended our production for a more mature audience and we have hit that target. we intend to do a regional release to start with and gradually expand throughout the country, eventually ending up on sky movies. because we are only releasing our production regionally the amount of prints we will have to produce would be considerably less then if we went straight for a country release however when we do end up printing for the country release, we would have to transport the prints safely in lorries and vans.


4) Who would be the audience for your media product?

Our media product would be aimed at an more mature audience between the ages of 17 and 30 however i think that our product could be shown to those of a younger audience as well, the age rating could go as low as 15 as our product has no swearing or bad language and no blood or horrifically Violante scenes. The main reason for it being aimed at a more mature audience is that we want the audience to understand the plot as it is given to them instead of having to work it out during or after the product has been shown.


5) How did you attract/address your audience?

I feel that our product has hit the Target audience that we intended but may also be shown to a slightly younger audience. Before we began filming we asked a couple of people what they thort of our idea and plot. Alot of them liked the idea and said it used thriller conventions like enigma, and it "questioned the audience". However there were those who believed that our idea was going to be hard to pull off which we as a group knew when we began to plan our idea. the people we asked were our own age, 16-17 year olds, when we told them they seemed to like our idea we feel that the complexity of our plot could attract a more mature audience and not just teenagers but i also feel that the action within our plot would appeal to a slightly younger audience, no younger then 12 years of age.


6) What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?

For starters i got to use all the filming equipment, like cameras and tripods alot more and i am alot more competent with them then i was while doing our preliminary exorcise, i also got to use some voice recorders as well which was a good way of getting real, live sound which helped alot with the realism of our product. Another thing i used alot over a period of time was the Mac computers in the editing suite, i used alot of different programs while editing our final product, for starters we used 'I Movie' to get a rough cut of our opening going, once we were happy that this was the base line for our thriller opening we moved it to 'Final Cut Pro' to be more specifice about shot length and tidy up the opening by adding smother cuts and trimming down shots. After cleaning up our opening we then moved on to do our titling which did not take us long as we were shown how to do the first one and then continued by ourselves.

We then moved out of changing our product and stated working on 'Garage band' which was the program we used to put all the sound effects and non-diagetice sound onto out opening we experimented with a number of effects before hand and had a rough idea of what sounds we wanted for certain shots for example we wanted heavy breathing or panting for the close ups of both mine and Georges legs during the chase scene, because there were next to no breathing effects on garage band at all we had to search the Internet for sound effects, luckily we found two that were as close as we were guna get so again used microphones to record the sound and then export it from the mic to the computer.

I feel I am now confident enough that i can plan a sequence and create a plot for a specific film genera, that i can use the practical equipment such as cameras and tripods to a good extent while obeying rules like the 180 Degree rule and finally use all the programs needed such as final cut and garage band to create a decent movie production.






7) Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product?

In my opinion, i feel that me and my group are alot more acustomed as to how to make a film, our Preliminary task was basic but good and it showed we couldmake a decent film extract as a group. The main problem with our Preliminary task was white balance, there were alot of shots that the white balance was off and it stuck out when we showd the final prelim inary product to the class so we madesure we checked the white balance regulary when doing our full foundation production. Another problem we felt we had was during planning our preliminary,we felt that we underplanned and had not considered enough, so we made sure we planned more cafully when doing our foundation production.

In a nut shel i feel thatme and my group have really taken to filming and editing, we have more of an idea of what we can do realisticly speaking we can make and plan a story and because we are all now experienced with the technology and equipment we are using we can film and edit our own foottage compitantly, i think we would just need a little more time to plan and we can come upwith a really good idea and also be able to film and edit it alot better then our preliminary task and our faoundation production.

Friday, 1 April 2011

Foundation Production- Titles and Fonts

For our titles we decided to use a basic simple font for the main bulk of our titles. For our main opening title though we went on to the website 'Da Font' and downloaded a special font type from there.
http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=107&page=1

We also put motion on the title using Final Cut Pro.

Foundation Production- Finishing changes on Thriller

We have had to make a number of changes to our thriller opening, firstly we had to cut our sequence down due to length, this meant cutting out the shot revers shot conversation with myself (Jake) and the Hitman (George)and we also had to trim bits down off of the Chase scene shots. Another thing we had to do is get rid of some dialogue, the Chase scenes dialogue was completely cut out because if we had left it in the opening would have been too long. All the changes made were because of opening length i think that we were lucky to have come out with a fairly decent product despite our team having to cut out some key points of the opening.  

Foundation Production: Editing Process

 During editing, we made a few changes to our initial ideas. First of all we started off editing in iMovie, this is where we arranged all the usable shots in order. These shots formed a rough cut of our thriller, however it was too long therefore we had to cut the sequence down.
  For the chase scene we had to increase the intensity to keep the audience interested, we did this by shortening the time between shots. As our selected footage was too long we had to make a big decision in getting rid of the dialogue scene in which the villain meets Jake's character and pulls out a gun on him. In the end we chose to show Jake's character being hit, the shot then ends with A point of view shot showing Jake's view looking up at the sky, this then fades out to simulate Jake's character losing consciousness.
 For the gig scene we chose to cut it right down to the point of just establishing the setting as a gig. One reasons for this was because the smoke appeared in only a few shots this meant that it would affect the continuity of the sequence.

After sorting out the movie sequence and getting a final rough cut, we then moved  the film to Final cut pro to add more detail and finishing touches to the sequence, for example titles and transitions, both titles and shots were added and eddited, we added in out titles and then also made some very small changes to our sequence, stuff like triming shot lengths etc.

Thursday, 3 March 2011

Foundation Production: problems when filming

During filming we encountered a number of problems with set location, equipment and permisson to film.

Our first filming location was the Albemarle Centre, although we were able to film we had limited space at our disposal, equipment also presented issues by lack of equipment by having only one tape for two cameras.

Another issue we had was permison to film with our intended props at Ashdown forest, we called the police non-emergency contact line and made them aware that we were filming with props that the general public may have thought could be dangerous, we then received a call from the police asking us to not film the sequence, we could do the chase but only without the fake gun.

We have been set back a few times due to little things when filming, so far the things we need to do to finish our production are:
  • Foley artist both jacks band and the audience.
  • Finish the chase scene in the woods with the dialogue.
  • Do the bar scene with Jake and Dani.
  • Get a few shots of an audience.

Tuesday, 15 February 2011

Foundation Production: Costume

For the opening we are going to use simple, casual costumes like everyday people. The opening is in non- chronological order and we see the very begining so we see our main character (Ewan) before everything happens, he is an average guy meeting friends so its vital he looks casual.

We also see Ewan interact with a Waitress at the club, so she (played by Dani) will have to look like a waitress e.g. black top, dark skirt etc.

Jack is playing in his band during the club scene so he is also going to wear stage clothes.

Monday, 14 February 2011

Foundation Production: Inspiration

Within our group we came up with ideas, in the end we decided to mix two of them one was a chase scene in the woods and another was a club scene.

The inspiration for this came from the film 'Rock'n'Roller' specificly the club scene.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20DN9wDhbAo

This was the main inspiration that we used, this clip helped us to see how we could make the club scene work we then based the chase scene around that. Specifically, we liked the way you could here the music from the band inside, playing whilst the fight went on outside the club. It then switched onto the band inside, where they were playing that same song. It forms a sound bridge that links between scenes really nicely.

We also decided to to do the opening ion non-cronological order similarly to 'Memento'.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z87iY8rPJF8&feature=related

Foundation Production Filming Dates

We are going to film on the 17th feburury which is going to be the club scene, we have been given permission by the organiser of the event to film the bands. Also we will film through half term specifically the 19th 20th and 21st for the chase scene; we dont need permision to film here, as it is public land. However we are going to put up notices to let any bystanders know that we are filming.  

Thursday, 10 February 2011

Foundation Production Plot Animatic

This is the animatic for our thriller opening, it is in a very simple form, but this is the layout for our plot through out the opening. it is a very basic animatic and it is likely that we will add or get rid of shots depending on whether we come up with new ideas or better ways to shoot specific shots for example a shot revers shot in the club is essential because the audience needs to see and hear both characters however when the pretagonist is begining to feel the effects of the spiked drink, we don't see Dani's character do anything to the drink so we may add a shot of her adding something to it.  

Monday, 7 February 2011

Foundation Production: Sound and Music

We are going to use Jack's band's music for our thriller and possible some other originals created on software programs like garage band.

Seeing as recording the music live would be extreamly difficult and it may affect the sound due to the crowd, we are going to re- record Jack and his band and put the music in place, so we are going to use foly to put the music in sync using garage band.

Media Foundation Production Script (1st Draft)

Chase Scene:
Jake: what the hell are you doing!?!? those were innocent people!?
Hitman: Like we care.
Jake: why are you doing this, i did what you asked?!
Hitman: We don't want any lose ends.
Jake: so what you kill your own people?!, how long before he comes for you?
Hitman: haha, well, truth is the game was rigged from the start.

4 Days earlier

Club Scene:
Dani: Can i get you somthing?
Jake: Jack Daniels, please
Dani: Sure thing
Few Moments Later...
Dani: here
Jake: How much?
Dani: oh don't worry, it's on the house.
Jake: oh, chears
Dani: no problem, Enjoy

Tuesday, 1 February 2011

Premlinary Storyboard



As a group we discussed the story for our preliminary thriller and then assigned roles so we could all individually get on with what we had to do. Jack was in charge of selecting and drawing the most important images from each scene. Dom then annotated the images to make the story easier to follow and to show their significance to the film.

Friday, 28 January 2011

Mise En Scene in Prelimanery video

Because I played a lead role in the film, I had to make sure that I had all the parts of my costume with me everyday of filming, this included things like the hat, jacket, scarf, the same jeans and trainers etc. I had to make sure Dom also was wearing the same jacket and clothes for the video as he played a part in it as well, as well as clothing I was also in charge of the props we used, I had to think to myself what we could use, for the final video we used my bag, and a phone it was my responsibility to bring the bag and I had to ensure Dom brought the phone in on the days that we filmed. a problem that I noticed in the video was Dom's hair, this was spotted during the late stages of editing, the problem was that Dom in most of the shots had his hair down but then in some of the final shots we see his hair was spiked up this is something we will have to look into when we start our foundation assessment.

another thing that I had to be careful of was my body language and facial expression, I needed to act suspicious, we decided to have me looking back a couple of times and act a little mysterious compared to an average person, this was the same for the facial expressions except I tried to show as little emotion as possible as to leave the audience guessing about my character.

Colour and lighting were an issue towards the end of the film, this was I think due to the difference in sunlight on the days of shooting, we will need to pay extra attention to this when doing our foundation assessment because I think this was the only real area we slipped a bit in.

setting was crucial for the opening, we needed to find a suitable area to film that was quiet and also looked a bit unused, so Dom found a room in the old building that we could use and showed me, I then came up with a the positioning of both Dom and myself and then mocked up where the camera would go. I think the setting worked well considering we were limited to college grounds and we need to ensure that the setting goes with the plot in our foundation production.

Thursday, 27 January 2011

Jake's five thriller openings

Law Abiding Citizen


Duration: from 00.30-03.00 minuets

The opening of Law Abiding Citizen is very dark yet gripping, the opening introduces a family and also the main character played by 'Gerard Butler' who has his family killed by some thugs. this opening was very gripping, it raised a lot of questions about the plot and the characters i think this is key to any good thriller movie, to make the audience want answers, if we can include this it our opening/plot then I think we would get abetter mark i also think that to make a good opening we need a good overall plot and instead of making a simple opening on its own we need to think of a story it can lead onto as well, even though we wont be showing the story.

Camerawork:
  • i liked the gentle tracking/panning movement sets the pace the audience are at and helps set them up for the later events in the opening. I think that we should try to do something like this and gradually take the pace higher as it progresses
  • Later in the opening the something happens that sets up the entire movie's plot the volume of cuts used and the pace of the shots increases to match the action of the scene, we need to ensure we do this when the action or event of our thriller increases or starts.   
Mise En Scene:
  • At the start the farther/ main character (Gerard Butler) and his daughter are sitting at a table she's making a necklace he is working, they exchange dialogue, you can tell they are a typical American happy family nice home, clothes, lifestyle. we can see this by their costume's they wear, and these are directly contrasted by the thugs costumes,we need to ensure that throughout filming our costumes match the mood and plot.
  • I liked the thugs costume in this opening, it definitely matched the character, another thing I liked was the blood used to emphasis the knife on Gerard Butler's character, we need to ensure the costumes are different from each other so the audience can determine the 'victim' from the 'thug' just by looking at them. 
Editing:
  • The fade in at the start of the opening is really good to give the audience a false sense of security and it makes way for the slow start to calm them before the event of the plot. I think the fade in is a good way to start off a thriller
  • One thing I noticed was the fade to black after Gerard butler's character had been stabbed I liked how it really emphasised the wound, pain and pace of the opening, I’m sure that this is what we will do if our plot involves similar circumstances. 
Sound:
  • The sound at the beginning of the opening is diagetic sound, it is also contrapuntal, and it matches the mood and atmosphere of the scene. This was really good to lull the audience into a fake false sense of security; it helps give the impression of a normal happy evening before the plot begins. 
  • The sound changes as soon as Gerard Butler's character gets hit by the bat, it becomes non-diagetic sound and also becomes darker and faster, there is also emphasis on certain sounds, for example the wife screaming or breathing.  I think the use of the emphasis of certain sound's is a really good way to get the audience more involved with the scene and has a bigger impact on them so is useful to use in a thriller opening. 

The Transporter 


Duration: whole clip

This is not the entire opening, but I could not find another clip.
The opening to 'The Transporter' is a very mysterious opening, the audience are almost immediately asking questions as to what he is doing, who is he doing it for and why is he doing it the opening does answer these questions and it also gives us an impression of what kind of character he is.

Camerawork:
  • I liked the slow tracking shots at the start, they worked as good establishing shots so immediately the audience could tell he was in a car park, and it also fit the slow, calm mood of the first bit of the opening. in some circumstances this would work better then if it was a fade in like 'Law Abiding Citizen'.
  • I liked the use of close up's and big close up's during the car scene when the thugs first get into the car, the difference between the them and Jason Statham’s character showed the experience and emotion between the thugs and himself, you could tell he's professional and he sticks to the rules. 
Mise En Scene:
  • I liked the whole concept of the smart car, smart character contrasted with the thugs simple, plain, tatty clothing, I also like the difference in behaviour, Jason Statham's character was completely calm compared to the thugs who's body language and tone of voice was the exact opposite which made Jason's character appeal to the audience because he knows what he's doing,
  • I also liked the props used the balaclava was good to fit a stereotypical thug, and the guns also were a nice touch I also noticed that the thugs had bags with them probably filled with money, we will have to come up with a way to show there is weapons present without having an literal gun there. 
Editing:
  •     the green tint at the start of the clip was a nice touch, it spoke to the genra of the film and kept in conjunction with the mood.
  • there was a few 'wipes' at the start of the sequence to show passing time so the opening credits would match the sequence.
Sound:
  • the music at the very beginning was mysterious, it doesn’t amount to much at the start although, it does make the audience fairly suspicious of what he is doing. The pace of the music increases when the car begins to move, this now starts building a little bit of tension within the audience, I think this is a good way to start a thriller and if we find a suitable soundtrack for it then it would work nicely.
  • when they are in the chase scenes the music intensifies to fit the mood of the action, all the music in the opening is parallel sound, it all fits in with the mood of the scene, in this case contrapuntal sound could also be used, for example, he could be listening to classical music in his car while being chased aggressively by the police.    
Green Zone


Duration: 00.00-02.34

The opening to 'Green Zone' is much more action packed then the last two, it dives the audience head first into the action. the clip focuses on one particular guy, named 'General Al Rawi' this action approach to the thriller works well because it doesn’t give the audience time to think straight from the get go, they want to know who this ‘Al Rawi’ is and why is he  so important?

Camerawork:
  • this is the first opening that I have seen a 'Blocking or Slit frame' used, when the opening starts you see a man struggling to open a safe for a book, this is a good indication that the book holds some importance to the story and that we may see it later, another thing I liked about the camera work was the shaking of the camera, to give the feel of panic, hurry and I also felt an element of excitement. I think during action scenes we will have to do a similar technique when doing an action scene that involves fast paced movement.
  • I think the fast tilting throughout the opening really keeps the pace of the opening going, and it also keeps the audience in tune with what’s going on, I also like the amount of zoom used in the opening it really adds that extra feel of panic and keeps the audience interested by keeping the pace. I think that all of this is a really good for this opening
Mise En Scene:
  • I thought lighting was clearly effective here, purely because there was no lighting, the only light that the audience got was from the explosions outside, this really makes the audience focus on the situation at hand. I think that we should use a similar approach however it would be hard to pull off.
  • I liked the costumes and setting of the opening, it was obvious from the start that this was an undeveloped country(3rd world country) due to the bombs and explosion, but you could tell they were fairly wealthy and held some importance. this could be used with our thriller opening but it depends on the plot that we come up with and when we do confirm our plot we need to make sure the setting is suitable with the mood and pace of the opening,
Editing:
  • I didn’t see many special effects other then explosions towards the end when you see the General drive away and the camera zooms out, apart from that I did not see much Editing in the opening.
  • I liked how the camera gave a similar amount of time for each shot, it keeps them tuned in as to not confuse them to a point where they cant tell what’s going on, I think that if we have a action scene in our opening, we need to be carful not to over do it with shot lengths and camerawork
Sound:
  • The non-diagetic sound through out the opening is parallel sound it matches the mood/atmosphere of the moment and it keeps at a steady pace through out I think that we should make sure we pick a good soundtrack for our opening, it is vital it matches the pace of the scene.
  • I liked how the sound was constantly focusing on the extras rushing around to get out, it was good because it really got the audience immersed into the panic and stress of the situation,
 Valkyeri


Duration: whole clip

valkyeri in a whole is a very plot driven film, however the opening is crucial to the overall story, the opening sees Tom cruise's character writing about his view of Hitler and the Nazi Rich he complains about his leadership and goals, we can tell from this opening that Cruise wants him gone. also in the opening we see the German military division that Cruise is in charge of get's attacked, tom's character is wounded this also raises questions about the plot, will he live, how does this effect him, what will happen this keeps the audience interested. With out the opening sequence the beginning of the story would be hard for the audience to digest.

Camerawork:
  • I liked the very slow paced tracking shot at the beginning after the oath, it gently introduces the audience into Tom Cruises character I also liked the slow tilts and I noticed a very slight zoom. All of this just paces the film more so again the audience can focus entirely on what he is saying.
  • towards the end of the opening, we see that the German military division is getting attacked, this completely changes the pace of the sequence because instead of slow tracking and dissolves like in the first few shots of the opening, we now get brisk, fast paced cut's this change sudden of pace. I think a sudden change of pace is a good way to evolve the story like in valkyeri.
Mise En Scene:
  • I think the costume at the beginning when he is writing works well with the mood, we know he's an officer because of the setting, he has a tent to himself, and in the dialogue he mentions the 'Officer corps' but his uniform suggests otherwise, its unbuttoned, tatty, he does not look like an officer. This is an area we will have to look at carefully with our opening.
  • at the very end we see that Tom Cruises character is badly wounded, this is again due to the costume and we can easily determine this from his character in general, his make up is dusty, pale as are his clothes, his costume is shredded and we can see from his facial expression that he is near death. we will have to address these actions with make up and costume changes, this is key for realism in the sequence.
Editing:

  • I could notice one bit of Editing but it was used frequently, the opening used dissolves at the start and another at the end of the sequence this was again used to keep the pace of that scene slow and steady, and I think that we should look at more options instead of just using cuts all the time.
  • I did feel a build up from start to finish the shots got gradually faster, they went in sections if you will for example at the beginning it was really slow to focus on the dialogue, the when he was talking to the General about troop movement it went to normal cutting speed, then when the attack started it went a lot faster so there was a sort of element of cross cutting there.
Sound:
  • I liked the light, gentle diagetic sound at the beginning, the wind blowing, the tent being blown by the wind, the flame from the candle they all seemed delicately put there so as to not interrupt
  • I noticed that after the dialogue with the General there was a moment of silence or very slight sound, then when AA gun fired the sound and volume of the gun was used to wake the audience up. 
The Disappearance of Alice Creed
I have not seen the film as a whole but after whatching the opening i want to watch more, the opening sees two shifty guy's doing suspiscious things, breaking into a van, renovating a flat room so there is no light, or way of getting out.
Camerawork:
  • I liked the slow, steady, tracking tht is used at the start, it's good for the audience because we can see that they dont want to be seen and there up to somthing. 
  • i think the use of cuts when they were renovating the the flat room, it really made the audience pay attention.
Mise En Scene:
  • the costumes of the two shifty looking guy's were very normal, they obviously dident want much attention, they were noraml guy's but with a devalish plan.
  • i think the facial exspresion between the two characters were really good, because there was no dialogue it was the only thing to go on interms of there intentions.
Editing:
  • the pace of the cut's increased when they were renovating the room as to get us to wonder about it, they dont want us to know the details of what exactly they are doing/ going to do with that room.
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Sound:
  • i liked ho the opening focused on certain sounds, so the audience would only focus on what they were told to to sort of add more menaching bcause they were sounds that suggested they were up to no good. 
  • i think the use non-diagetic sound that comes in when oneof the characters does somthing is a good way to get the audience attracted to that, e.g. when one of them nail's meat to a tree there is a non-diagetic sound that really makes them focus on that bit of meat, why did they do that?

Thursday, 13 January 2011

Music

Our choice of music for our short film is - Hard to find: Lock stock bass.
It's a movie theme tune from Lock Stock And Two Smoking Barrels. The song is quite simple sounding but it's very effective for our film, with it's dark, dangerous and eerie qualities.

feedback on completed product

Cameron Williams-Hill:
"I thought the film was really good, the camera work looked good but the lighting needed work. I'm not sure wether it was white balance or lighting but the shots with dialogue needed work."

George Burtenshaw:
"I thought the video was really good, i like the music it goes well with the sequence of shots used. I thought the walls looked a bit different in some shots?" 

Both these people don't do media but they managed to spot the certain aspects of our video that were wrong, for our main assessment the main issue we need to pay attention to is lighting and white balance.